aesmael: (friendly)
You are a plant for the sake of a plot point. A plot plant.
aesmael: (friendly)
    According to this post here, Joss Whedon has been writing a webcomic. You can read it here. So far it is just short and fluffy fun. It may or may not be finished now.
aesmael: (sudden sailor)
    I just finished reading through the archives of Alien Dice the other day and moved on to the next webcomic in my folder, Abstract Gender. I've since finished that one too (it was mostly filler comics) but at the time indulged in a short rantish thing at [livejournal.com profile] soltice on the topic. Since I think it turned out a bit better than my usual review attempts, here is a copy-paste of my thoughts.

Cut because of large text )

    Now  I am reading old Altermeta. So far it is much better drawn and written and far more engaging than either of the other two, but this is just the first few pages.
aesmael: (it would have been a scale model)
[2:27:33 AM] [livejournal.com profile] soltice: Vader: Obi-wan Kenobi is here. The force is with him.
Me: The *whole* force? My God...
[2:32:46 AM] [livejournal.com profile] aesmael: With him, yes, but not willingly. They would much rather frolic among the rubble of Alderaan.
[2:33:08 AM] [livejournal.com profile] soltice: Heh.
[2:33:23 AM] [livejournal.com profile] soltice Princess Leia a raging lesbian? Perhaps...
[2:33:49 AM] [livejournal.com profile] aesmael: Hee. Perhaps if we gave Luke a sex change.
[2:33:52 AM] [livejournal.com profile] aesmael: Lucy?
[2:34:23 AM] [livejournal.com profile] soltice: Hmmm, does the Force have the ability to do sex changes?
[2:34:56 AM] [livejournal.com profile] aesmael: It has the power to make people take Anakin seriously, so yeah, probably.
[2:35:09 AM] [livejournal.com profile] soltice: Ha!
[2:36:09 AM] [livejournal.com profile] aesmael: As Yoda might say: "Change your sex you cannot. Only gender there is. Choose, and be."
aesmael: (probably quantum)
    Something else from class. We were being shown the way some items were catalogued in the TAFE library and looking at The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe. One of the copies had listed under 'other titles' The Chronicles of Narnia bk. 2, but no series title. It struck me as very odd that someone could read that on a book cover and conclude it to be a title of the book rather than an indication that this book is in fact the second volume of a series. Odd, but also familiar.

    Cut for Doctor Who series three (and the finale of series two) spoilers )

    So, yes. It puzzles me that some people, no matter how strong the evidence, seem to flat out refuse to make connections between what they see and instead treat each case as a separate, entirely unrelated entity.
    Yep, that catalogue entry reminded me of Creationism. Somehow, someone took the words 'The Chronicles of Narnia, book 2' from the cover of The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe and concluded that this was an alternate title for the book, not the series name and volume number. In fact it is an alternate title for the book. It is also a very clear indication that this volume does not stand alone, but has continuity with what came before and after.
    Of course, closer examination reveals that the Narnia books are not a simple ordered series. They were not published in the chronological order they are presented in, and were written in yet a different order. But, one needs to investigate to discover this - the manner of connection is less obvious than the fact.

Hrm

2007-07-29 01:17
aesmael: (haircut)
    I reached the 'stop point' (not quite an end) of Technical Perfection. I had to force myself to continue to a point close enough to the end to call it first draft done because that first version is really just a skeleton. It is missing so much I do not think I can call it a proper story at all.
    It might be a coincidence, it might have been the cause, but I am glad I did get to that end when I did because when I did I realised the story needs to be pulled out a bit to one side. Interestingly this also makes it a little more like it was originally supposed to be.

    I also watched TV, but I still do not do reviews.Daleks in Manhattan/Evolution of the Daleks, Criminal Minds and Torchwood. )

    Ho hum. That'll be enough for now. I'm tired, need to sleep. Lots of dog and car washing today and teaching Monroe to fetch. So far she's got the first part right. I should get some sleep. Plenty of stuff to sort out tomorrow, plus a recent idea for a story to spin out. It should work fine on its own but also make a good introduction to a larger James Hoyt story. Then, back to Epic Fantasy *g* I've had my week off (or was it two?).
    Those last lines stirs reminders there is no time for just now. You and I both will have to wait.
aesmael: (sudden sailor)
    On my way back home I had a thought about the Federation and its nominally multispecies nature (that's the United Federation of Planets of Star Trek fame). Despite claiming to represent an equal partnership of species from many different worlds the Federation we see is dominated by humans. Nearly every character we see is human. The senior officers are all human (particularly of rank Captain and above). The headquarters are on Earth; indeed, the Solar System is designated Sector 001. This has bugged me for quite some time.
    Why does it seem as if non-humans barely exist in this society? Where are all the alien crews and officers? Why is it every enemy lunges direct for Earth as their target and never, say, the Tellarite homeworld? The Federation is a Federation in name only. It might better be called the Terran Republic.
    My thought was that the Federation is basically the United States in space and the United States does not enter into equal partnerships. Its relationships are hierarchical. Other cultures are expected to be assimilated and come in the position of supplicants when they do; either way their culture itself is ignored. It is no wonder there is scarcely any alien presence in this society where hypothetically humans should be a minority.

    I thought again before I started writing this entry and decided I was wrong. It is not the fault of the United States that the Federation is what it is. Rather, I shall say it is only to be expected because the story is told by humans and, being what we are, it is overwhelmingly likely that the story would be human-centric.
aesmael: (friendly)
    Seems Nature is publishing fiction again. The first story, Olympic talent, can be found here.

Oh My

2007-07-04 09:41
    Looks like it is Ansible time again.
aesmael: (friendly)
    The latest Wild Cards book has been copyedited and scheduled for release in January (I don't know when/if it appears here yet). Direct from the fingers of the editor.
aesmael: (writing things down)
    Another 239 words last night. Blip or acceleration? We won't know for a week.
    Last night I watched what I think was the first episode of Hyperdrive, some new BBC Sci-fi show. I will not be watching any other episodes. I also watched, tonight, 'Runaway Bride', last year's Doctor Who Christmas Special. If I ignore the fact that the plot was completely stupid, it was a whole lot of fun, although there were rather more funny noises from the Empress than I would have preferred. I also find myself agreeing with [personal profile] infiniteviking that I do not like the idea that the Doctor needs a Companion. The viewers need a Companion, not the Doctor. Of course I have only been watching a few years now and only snatches of the older series (the ABC played the whole thing in the couple of years leading up to the new episodes).
    Edit: It probably made a nice complement to Hogfather too. I'm thinking of the scene where the Doctor pointed out that the formation of the Earth is beautiful only because there is someone to watch it.
One of the articles I read today has reminded me of something I sometimes wonder, about how our screens and cameras look in wavelengths we don't see. I know (assume) we don't make any effort to capture those faithfully but I don't know we specifically exclude them. So I wonder how our screens look in those wavelengths and if photo manipulation software affects the appearance of our photos in infrared and ultraviolet in a way incongruous with the effects we produce in visible light. It makes me think that if we ever expand the range of our vision we will need to revamp our equipment and software to remove distortions and artefacts we are presently unaware of - once we realise something is wrong.
Read more... )
aesmael: (just people)

So. So is a sound I make when about to speak. Think of it as a cough, a clearing of the throat.

So. Being disconnected as I have been the past few days and not in any mood for writing I have burned through the ~700 pages of Iain M. Banks' Consider Phlebas and The Player of Games. I have seen it said more than once that Consider Phlebas is his worst (it was his first published work of science fiction), that it has no plot, and reading the Culture novels should be started with The Player of Games (even Borders does this, highlighting the latter as a cult classic in the stores I have visited). It still made me tear up at the end and does now too, just glancing at the appendix. I think that is good enough.

I do think The Player of Games is much more strongly written, despite being published only a year after, so I wonder if Consider Phlebas was perhaps written much earlier and only published after he achieved success as a non-genre writer? That is something like what happened with Steven Erikson; the first, weakest novel being written many years before publication.

Well (another throat-clearing sound). I say The Player of Games is more strongly written but it did not produce the same degree of emotional response in me. Both from their intensity were exhausting to finish. I think – I hope – I have learned a little by way of technique from reading it.

There were parts I read as rather definite condemnations of the barbaric, repressed natue of our society, as well as of capitalism (the Culture is an atheistic socialist utopia and rather exemplifies what I mean when I say 'people should be free'). Some might be interested to know there is a fair amount of sex-changing in the novel (mostly off-screen). At one point it is explicitly linked to the changing of hairstyles and embarking on cruises to illustrate the degree of 'just something people do' it is regarded with. Despite this the actual perspective of the novel is mostly conventional (heterosexual male, albeit a non-white one, which matters). Conventional is not a bad thing and attention is drawn to the fact this character isan oddity in this society.

From beginning, as often happens (as happened, for example, with Gardens of the Moon), the story feels intensely familiar, as if I have read it before. Banks, if I am not being hasty by drawing conclusions from a sample of two, seems to have a habit of writing (not drawing out) climactic sequences which cover just as many pages as the build up to same, followed by a very brief and hollowing denoument over just a few pages. I am wondering if he would see a story in which characters are not shaken out of their ability to live their old lives worth writing.

At some point, around the just-after middle, there is a change. Afterward the perspective feels distanced, as if we have been locked out of Gurgeh's head. Later this fades somewhat. Most apt, I think. Although...

It seemed almost-clear, at the time. Things fade out of trance.

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John Scalzi|Whatever has made available an audio version of his novelette The Sagan Diaries, kindly read by some of his friends (you may have heard of one or two?): Elizabeth Bear|[personal profile] matociquala, Mary Robinette Kowal, Ellen Kushner|[profile] ellen_kushner, Karen Meisner|[profile] _stranger_here, Cherie Priest|[profile] cmpriest, and Helen Smith|Dr Helen.

[Found via John|SF Signal because I have not been keeping up with my own reading]
I agree with the substance of Alon Levy's post about progress and equal rights but it got me thinking about this idea: If your story needs to be bookended by explanation to be understood then it is incomplete. It is true that stories generally rely on the common culture of writer and readers to be understood but this forms part of the text itself as well as the general milieu in which they live. Only when times change or the work is brought to a foreign culture is it necessary to add explanations so that reader's will properly appreciate the situations and the significance of words, deeds, social positions, etc.

    A fantasy or science fiction story faces the greater challenge of (often) trying to create the impression of an alien (but usually not completely alien) setting in the reader's mind. I suppose this might account for the tendency to include extra material like glossaries of terms and cast lists. I don't think having a map should count as making a story 'incomplete' and probably nor should other such materials if the story does not actually depend upon them. In conclusion I have lost the thrust of what I was saying and should probably try again later.

    On a related note, go read this short piece. It is an example of a particular kind of writing of which I am a great fan, though you will have to the end to find out what (or ask me)
aesmael: (haircut)
But I only just realised one of the biggest ironies of Greg Egan's Teranesia  In the early parts of the story Prabir often says such things as "Come the revolution..." apparently speaking of an eagerly anticipated biological revolution which will give humans mastery of their own bodies and freedom to remake themselves as they wish. But later, when the revolution arrives it is not at all what he had in mind and he ends up fighting against it.
aesmael: (sudden sailor)
aesmael: (nervous)
In the Harry Potter series they have so-called Every Flavour Beans and this bothers me. Amongst other nastiness, sometimes they will be human flavour.

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