2012-10-21

Originally published at a denizen's entertainment. You can comment here or there.

Level 26: "This place seems reasonably safe"

Quiet, empty. The only evil around is Angamaitë of Umbar. He might be the only danger around here, but Marash is wary. Kitting herself out for crossbow has weighed her down. She trudges east.

A vortex, crackling with energy. They close range, she fires. Those bolts are magical alright, magically worse than ordinary bolts. But they are still better than the arrows she had been firing, so she isn't panicking yet. Get rid of the vortex, then get rid of the bolts. Onwards.

She hisses. There is a tengu about. She doesn't see it, but that yanking sensation is familiar. A bit of bouncing and it's gone somewhere else. She doesn't know if she got a hit in yet.

In the narrow corridor ahead of Marash, a lone snaga. Via Detect Evil she senses, immediately on the other side of the wall, a pit filled with dozens of orcs

A snaga? Oh, don't worry about the tengu then. Marash has stumbled upon a pit of orcs. An orc captain, surrounded by eight uruks on guard, flanked by thirty black orcs, a dozen cave orcs and forty-three snagas for flavour. Good grief. And Angamaitë is awake and after her too. This is liable to go badly.

Now she throws away her bad bolts. They had been useful enough to fire, but right now she needs to be unburdened. Lack of speed could kill her.

Orcs, it turns out, are much easier than Marash remembered. Her main moment of panic came from carelessly drinking a potion that enhanced her constitution at the expense of wisdom, driving two prayers out of her mind. Little else does she find but some fresh sources of identification and a wand of wonder. Hopefully she can soon fix her foolishness.

A forest wight attacks, seeming uncertain, as likely to retreat as press on. Would be nice and easy except when it is wounded it draws upon Marash's mana to heal itself.

A mess, a mess. Carelessness gets her in an open fight with a gnome mage, summoning wyverns and other creatures to harry her. More carelessness, stumbling into a group of Crebain and Mirkwood spiders. The evil crows' harsh shrieking sending the spiders into a frenzy of speed, until Marash had to portal herself to safety even having blasted wave upon wave of them away.

Level 27: "You feel a little lucky"

Through several layers of rock, Marash is aware of another orc pit. A captain, flanked by uruks and black orcs, east and west mirrored cadres of orc shamans and cave orcs, all surrounded by a ring of snagas

Lucky? Directly south of her are more than a hundred of Morgoth's creatures. Another pit of orcs. One of their captains, a half-dozen half-orc warriors, a pair of uruks, a full eighteen shamans, with twenty-four cave orcs and a full forty-four snaga flanking. And on the far side of the pit is Uglúk, the Uruk with his own escort, a half-dozen hill orcs and another four half-orcs. Somewhere, beyond that, a black knight in Morgoth's service lays waiting.

Lucky. Will she be lucky to survive? Or lucky this is all she faces. At least the entrance is near Uglúk and his escort, so if Marash plays it right she won't have to worry about being surprised from behind.

Interrupted on her march by shrieking in the distance. This won't do - another flock of crebain. She puts them down, but on her return, as soon as she opens the door nearest the stairs a hill orc pushes through. Already? Worrying.

A couple of hits gotten in and the hill orc flees, revealing Uglúk right behind. Marash tries her rod of drain life, but fumbles its activation a couple of times and then, disappointed by its effect on the Uruk.

Uglúk is fortunately not a complicated foe, and Marash heals swiftly. He flees, she re-blesses herself, and turns her attention to the latest hill orc.

The first wave is past. One of the orcs had dropped a scroll which Marash uses to enchant her Maul of Westernesse for greater damage. Successfully this time.

More orcs than she imagined, supplemented by novice rangers and another hydra. She re-enchants her shield with a scroll from the resulting clutter, drinks a potion to enhance her appearance further.

The black knight is upon her as she mops up, conjuring darkness around her. A quick dose of drain life renders him vulnerable to violence, swiftly dispatched in the end.

Uglúk took Marash by surprise while she sifted through the treasure and trash dropped by his fellow orcs. Another dose of the rod and she soon had him on the run again, this time without an endless stream of orcs in support.

Uglúk the Uruk flees before the might of Marash, half-troll priest

He dropped a shield when he died. To make room for it, Marash reluctantly put on an iron helm she had found previously and discarded her Hat of Beauty. The shield turned out to be worthless to her, but she soon after found a powerful whip which granted enhanced defence, stealth and the ability to see the invisible. Perhaps that, and the orcs, is enough to account for feeling lucky, but she continues exploring.

Another of her many mistakes? She stumbled upon a quythulg, a heap of inchoate flesh, a pulsing mound on the dungeon floor. Waiting to see what such a monstrosity could possibly do, it teleported itself away to the next room. She followed and found a gang of trolls waiting. Cause to back out already, and then the quythulg summoned a large group of novice mages to harass her. It disappeared again immediately after, leaving Marash to clean up.

Marash fights in a narrow hall between two wider chambers. Ahead she can see three stone trolls and eight novice mages crowding the entrance to get at her. Behind, another novice mage lurks just around the corner.

Mages are annoying. Not even slightly tough in battle now, they persist in magically blinding and confusing Marash, forcing her to use up healing potions to stay aware of the battle.

Almost the same location as before, this time at the chamber location is the quythulg responsible for this mess, two stone trolls and fourteen energy hounds ready to zap her.

Just when she's nearly finished mopping up, she sees the quythulg is back. It summons a pack of energy hounds as if contemptuous of Marash's efforts, and that is intolerable. She prays, launches an orb of draining into the room. The quythulg and a stone troll dissolve immediately. Numerous hounds howl in pain and flee, but they live. Not good enough.

Marash's orb of draining pulses through the room, dissolving the quythulg and one of the stone trolls into nothing, but leaving her to face the rest of the pack.

A second orb thins the pack more definitively. Then she sets to work with her crossbow until she has the energy for a third orb, and finally more bolts until she is almost entirely out of ranged death. No bolts, no mana to power her prayers. There's the wand of wonder, but that risks destroying the room and everything in it.

Absent-mindedly she scoops a set of gauntlets off the floor before wading in with her mace... Paurnen? Artifact gauntlets? Quickly replacing her old magic gloves with those, she stalks into the chamber with menace.

The room falls silent. Only Marash and a rot jelly in the corner persist, and neither is going to trouble the other.

Better defence, better accuracy. More damage with every blow. The ability to conjure bolts of acid at intervals. Further details yet unknown, but no mere magic gloves will suffice for her now. She will make better use of these than that unfortunate novice mage ever would or could.

Anything else in this place before she moves on? Her first four-headed hydra, apparently. How many heads can these things get? It seemed to be guarding a room of not much. Nothing evil detected inside, and it turns out hardly anything non-evil. Just a cave bear sleeping on a ring of the dog.

Marash stands in corridor looping around a large chamber. The corridor is empty except for an amulet on the floor, and Marash senses no evil nearby.

Then, the phase spiders come after her. They must have used that straggler novice mage as bait, and now half-real arachnids close in upon her. She takes a step and they bounce her around like tengu. At least they aren't very fearsome in themselves.

Marash has been abruptly teleported into a trap, finding herself in a dark corridor with no known path to where she was, surrounded on three sides by phase spiders.

She is set upon by a sabre-toothed tiger. It doesn't stick around very long, so she uses the peace to get some identifying her whip and the last details of Paurnen. The whip turns out to be a Defender, and might be even more useful than her maul.

Up ahead she spies a wereworm. Looks like exactly the sort of acid-drenched monstrosity she wants nothing to do with. Time to leave this place.

Carefully, she weaves a path away and manages to reach a set of stairs down without seeing it again... until she realises, if she is keeping the whip to use, her maul is now a huge burden on her movements. Time for another brief trip to town to stow it.

In town she drops her Maul of Westernesse at home, stocks up on scrolls of recall and identify, and zaps herself back down again.

Originally published at a denizen's entertainment. You can comment here or there.

Mama's Boy by David Alexander

Originally published May 1955 in Manhunt; this edition 1995

Publisher: Oxford University Press

Collected in: Hard-Boiled: An Anthology of American Crime Stories (ed. Bill Pronzini & Jack Adrian)

 

MA15+

(D, L, V)

Drug Use {PG} {alcohol}

Coarse Language {M}

Violence {MA}

 

Representations

Gender:

Viewpoint character is intensely misogynistic and focused on distorted ideals of masculinity.

Sex:

Heterosexual appeal played up by the lead as means of making his living, modelling and conning or robbing women.

Race & Ethnicity:

No mention, consequently presuming whiteness.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

Viewpoint character fixated on his body and taking care of it in a naive, grotesque way.

 

Awards

None found

 

Notes

Another upsetting story. Driven entirely by the viewpoint character's hatred of women, to the point of murder as a way of thrilling himself and proving his masculinity. All my sympathy and admiration lies with his victims. In the one case, her canny quick-wittedness that is his downfall, and in the other the futile fight she puts up. Quite upsetting, even to skim for getting this rating up.

Originally published at a denizen's entertainment. You can comment here or there.

The Screen Test of Mike Hammer by Mickey Spillane

Originally published July 1955 in Male; this edition 1995

Publisher: Oxford University Press

Collected in: Hard-Boiled: An Anthology of American Crime Stories (ed. Bill Pronzini & Jack Adrian)

 

M

(D, V)

Drug Use (M) {Tobacco}

Violence (PG)

 

Representations

Gender:

Women simultaneously as infantilised possessions and dangerous manipulators.

Sex:

Only heterosexuality represented (brief story, but suffused with it)

Race & Ethnicity:

All characters unmarked US, presumed white.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

'Crazy' people as murdering maniacs.

 

Awards

None found

 

Notes

This was very short and equally off-putting. Really brought to my attention the mistake I'd made in buying a Mike Hammer anthology - I'd got Mickey Spillane confused with Raymond Chandler. Only three pages long but oozing misogyny and one-dimensional macho heroics that would put an '80s action film to shame. Did not like, considering getting rid of the Mike Hammer collection unread.

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